keox escribió:This composition is about smoke on public places, my opinion on the subject is: by the one hand, the opinion about don’t smoke of people must be respected, but I think that must be respected the opinion of smokers too.
Is obvious that smoke annoying nonsmokers, but I think that the bars is maked for smoking and drinking.
by other hand, I´m certain that if I was if I was not smoking, I would not think that, and I´m certain that I would bother very much that people was smoking in public places, but since but while I smoke, I will be in accordance with this act
aver quien lo hecha un vistazo y lo corrige un poquito
gracias!
This composition is about smok
ing on public places, my opinion on the subject is:
On one hand, the opinion
of people not wanting (o "of who don't want to smoke") to smoke must be respected, but I think that
the opinion of smokers must be respected too.
I
t's obvious that smoke annoy
s nonsmokers, but I think that
(fuera este the) bars
are ma
de for smoking and drinking.
On the other hand, I´m certain that if I
didn't smoke, I would not think that
way, and I´m certain that I would bother very much
about people
(fuera el was) smoking in public places, but since
(fuera esto) I smoke, I will be in accordance with this act
¿act? si quieres decir hecho, es fact, y si quieres decir medida, measure.
Hala, ahí lo llevas.
PD: Mamones, no puede uno andar perdiendo el tiempo con negritas, cómo apretáis...
